When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
There are a lot of
develop (какая часть речи?) technologies in the world. Technology is
continuing (сомневаю в выборе глагола) our future but it is closing our past. We have technologies need and needless (
We have technologies that we need and do not need). -
второй вариант, так как в первом странные прилагательные. Technology is abating our physical skills we are become very lazy. - нет связки между двумя частями фразы.The first technology is
computer -
нет артикля. Computers become more
and more important for us. We can manage any things even if we sit
down on
the a chair.
Technology has been given some things without effort. - а зачем тут пассивный залог? We do not have to walk because we have transportation. Nowadays
we have which - нет дополнения, например something earlier was impossible and we
did not think about that. -
о чем мы не думали? именно прошедшее время нужно? We have
robotics. They are doing do anything
which we want.
robotics - это наука, которую нельзя заменить словом they. All modern factories and companies have robotics
(,) therefore they
account -
считаются? they are considered to be the most modern and their goods have the best
place in the world. -
читатель воспримет place in the world как некую территорию. Скажите, что товары самые популярные We are continuing
to creating -
мы продолжаем создавать, создавать - это инфинитив, а не -ing. new technologies and
flown -
кто куда улетел? что вы хотите сказать?Every day we can see that all countries want new technologies and they
do not comply each other. -
после comply ставится предлог with: do not comply with. Но вы уверены, что здесь этот глагол подходит? Therefore every day we see
in a lot of countries begin war. -
wars beginning in a lot of countries Later we want
to show
the power
which we have. The most important problem we have is
with guns. The bigger problem was when we
had been were creating guns and
the nuclear bomb. It is
a problem for other people and countries advantage (It is a problem for some countries and
an advantage for other countries).
- второй вариант предпочтительнее, так как четче и яснее Our technologies
are affecting affect anything and anybody living on the Earth. -
present simple, так как это отнюдь не в последние годы началось. We are loss all
which we could make without technologies. - вот эту фразу предлагаю переформулировать. Нельзя утратить действие, можно утратить навыки, которые были до появления технологий. Мы их уже потеряли отчасти: we have lost skills we had had/used to have before these technologies appeared. Или: we are not as skilled as we used to be before the technologies appeared.
As I wrote
(,) we become very lazy and we are unable to do anything without technologies. - жестоко
Прямо-таки ничего не можем без них?
In my opinion we must
care about take care of/be corncerned about nature
(,) then we will have
the best future. - вы хотели сказать именно "наилучшее будущее"? Вывод, кстати, совершенно не вяжется с тем, про что вы писали до этого.
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