Диалоги

[Gibsonmpgu]

I haven’t had ________ time to finish my composition.
...
-Would you like to do it on next Sunday? - это просьба или ...?
...
-You forgot to draw up  an the outline for of your composition.
...
-Where? I can't can't find them.

[Inga Meresina]

Спасибо большое за помощь.Все исправила вроде.Посмотрите пожалуйста, есть еще ошибки в обоих диалогах?
-Hello! How are things going?
 -Hi! How are you? I am upset. I haven’t had  any time to finish my composition.
 -Could I help you?
-Really? Great, thanks a lot!
-When do you want to start?
-Let’s do it today.
 -I am so sorry, I  can't help you today. I am very busy..
-Could you do it next Sunday?
-Yes. What time do you want to get together?
-At a quarter past six. Is it a deal?
 -All right! See you tomorrow.
-See you.
 (A day later, they are at home and they are doing composition)
-You forgot to draw up  the outline of your composition. You shouldn’t begin to write without an outline.
-That's a good idea. I will write it now.
(A few minutes pass.)
-You forgot to write an epigraph.
 -Yes, that's true. I will rewrite the beginning.
(A few minutes pass.)
 -How is it now?  How do you find my epigragh?
 -I like it a lot. May I give you a piece of advice?
 -Yes, certainly.
 -You forgot the break line.
-You're right!
 -How is it now? Do you like the introduction?
 -That’s wonderful! However…You made some spelling mistakes.
-Where? I  can't find them. I don’t see them!
 -Here and here. After the words ‘orchestra’ and ‘saxophone’.
 -Oh, thank you very much for correcting. Is it all right now?
 -Terrific! Just the thing!

[Gibsonmpgu]

-You forgot to draw up  the outline of your composition. You shouldn’t begin to write without an outline one.
Where? I  can't find them any.

[Inga Meresina]

Спасибо огромное.Как сейчас?

-Hello! How are things going?
 -Hi! How are you? I am upset. I haven’t had  any time to finish my composition.
 -Could I help you?
-Really? Great, thanks a lot!
-When do you want to start?
-Let’s do it today.
 -I am so sorry, I  can't help you today. I am very busy..
-Could you do it next Sunday?
-Yes. What time do you want to get together?
-At a quarter past six. Is it a deal?
 -All right! See you tomorrow.
-See you.
 (A day later, they are at home and they are doing composition)
-You forgot to draw up  the outline of your composition. You shouldn’t begin to write without one.
-That's a good idea. I will write it now.
(A few minutes pass.)
-You forgot to write an epigraph.
 -Yes, that's true. I will rewrite the beginning.
(A few minutes pass.)
 -How is it now?  How do you find my epigragh?
 -I like it a lot. May I give you a piece of advice?
 -Yes, certainly.
 -You forgot the break line.
-You're right!
 -How is it now? Do you like the introduction?
 -That’s wonderful! However…You made some spelling mistakes.
-Where? I  can't find any. I don’t see them!
 -Here and here. After the words ‘orchestra’ and ‘saxophone’.
 -Oh, thank you very much for correcting. Is it all right now?
 -Terrific! Just the thing!

[Gibsonmpgu]

Грамматических шибок нет.

[Inga Meresina]

в обоих диалогах?

[Gibsonmpgu]

... and take along your player with you everywhere.
 I do it, but I don’t understand what people say to me all the same anyway.
 You should broaden build up your vocabulary.
 Right, but how? I triy (?) to do it, but I forget every word (that) I learn by heart.
 You should read more and learn by heart the words from the text. - порядок слов
You should watch British and American movies and TV series and learn words from them.
 Thank you.I think it’s a good piece of advice.
 Yes, I also think so. You could attend our meetings at the English club as well.
 Where is the club? What do people do there?
 People talk to each other in English there. Englishmen (а женщины английские приходят?) and Americans often come to us over.
 When do you gather together? (нет в английском такого сочетания)
 Every Sunday and Saturday at a quarter past 12.
 You forgot to tell me where the club is located.
 Oh, yes.The club is located in Gorky street, in the building of the ‘British pub’ café.
 Could you  go there with me? I am very shy.
 Of course, I will! I go there all the time.
 What else could you advise me to do?
 You should work on your pronunciation. If you have good pronunciation, people will understand you.
 Yes, but I am afraid I cannot do it alone by myself.
 I can help you. Do you have the book ‘English pronunciation in Use’?
 Yes, I do. When do we meet to improve my pronunciation?
 Let’s meet on next Friday.
 Ok.Thank you very much in advance.
 See you.

Я по второму разу вам исправляю!

[Inga Meresina]

Спасибо большое!Как сейчас?
Hello! How's it going?
 Hi! How’s life? I have a problem.I should do something to my English..
 What's the matter? I know you feel at home in English.
 I can read without any difficulty but I don’t understand spoken English. My listening is awful.
 You should listen more. Listen to songs in English and to audiobooks everyday. Listen to BBC podcasts and take along your player  everywhere.
 I do, but I don’t understand what people say to me anyway.
 You should  build up  your vocabulary.
 Right, but how? I try to do it, but I forget every word  I learn by heart.
 You should read and learn by heart the words from the text more.You should watch British and American movies and  TV series and learn words from them.
 Thank you.I think it’s a good piece of advice.
 Yes, I also think so. You could attend our meetings at the English club as well.
 Where is the club? What do people do there?
 People talk to each other in English there.Britons and Americans often come over.
 When do you get  together?
 Every Sunday and Saturday at a quarter past 12.
 You forgot to tell me where the club is located.
 Oh, yes.The club is located in Gorky street, in the building of the ‘British pub’ cafe.
 Could you  go there with me? I am very shy.
 Of course, I will! I go there all the time.
 What else could you advise me to do?
 You should work on your pronunciation. If you have good pronunciation, people will understand you.
 Yes, but I am afraid I cannot do it by myself.
 I can help you. Do you have the book ‘English pronunciation in Use’?
 Yes, I do. When do we meet to improve my pronunciation?
 Let’s meet next Friday.
 Ok.Thank

[Gibsonmpgu]

Четыре пометки проигнорированы.

[Inga Meresina]

три нашла, четвертую никак не могу найти((

[Gibsonmpgu]

Я по количеству найденных не могу понять, ЧТО вы не нашли.

[Inga Meresina]

если я Вам еще не надоела, взгляните хоть глазком еще раз на тексты.Я вижу, все мои ошибки на "ненатуральность", я пишу на рунглише Однако, что бы я делала, если бы не Вы! Когда прошу подправить иностранцев, они как-то лояльно относятся к тексту-исправляют артикли в основном и предлоги.Иногда подправят некоторые слова.Но редко чтобы все исправят.Наверное мои диалоги сложны для понимания англичан, слишком русские))

[Inga Meresina]

кстати, если верить поисковику, to feel at home with English вариант более правильный.

[Gibsonmpgu]

Поисковик вам и не такое ещё выдаст. Так вот и пытайте нейтивов на предмет предлогов - тема очень путаная местами, у нас самих-то что, лучше в русском-то? А диалоги я правлю только по грамматике. То, что у вас рунглиш - ежу понятно, но бояться и стесняться этого не надо - вы же только начинаете въезжать в язык. А всё, что вы пишите, вполне внятно. Если я всё, что считаю неправильным, буду править, это уже не ваша, а моя работа будет. Вам это надо?

[Inga Meresina]

ну а сейчас в обоих диалогах все с грамматикой нормально?

[Gibsonmpgu]

 You should read and learn by heart the words from the text more. - Что здесь не так?

[tourist]

Gibsonmpgu

Я ничего подозрительного не вижу.
Слово more звучит как-то не по теме. Может его переставить ближе к глаголу?

[Inga Meresina]

порядок слов, но я не знаю, что именно.

[Gibsonmpgu]

А что такое для вас "порядок слов"?

[Inga Meresina]

подлежащее, сказуемое,  косвенное доп. с предлогом, прямое дополнение, косвенное дополнение без предлога, обстоятельство.