Ребята, очень нужна помощь питерскому благотворительному фонду

[Лиля]

Пожалуйста, нам очень нужна помощь в переводе страничек ребят-подопечных нашего фонда, на английский язык.
Никак заплатить не можем.
Ребята, кто сможет?

Здесь сайт нашего фонда http://nurm.ru/

Перевести надо страничку  http://nurm.ru/Natasha_Pylk.html

Но мы ищем и просто человека, кто сможет нам периодически помогать с переводом страничек.

В обмен могу только предложить что то из вебдизайна, изготовление баннера и т.л.

Фонд создан в память о питерской девушке, Наташе Нурм, погибшей год назад от редкой  и тяжелой болезни. Создан ее мужем.

Помогите, пожалуйста.

[Лиля]

 
похоже или или никто не знает английский язык или всех интересуют только бабки...
лучше бы старички интересовали   

[CartN.]

  Уважаемая Лиля! Не в том дело, что нужны бабки и прочее! Тут нужны профессионалы, а то я такого напереведу... 90% форумчан только учат языки и не все имеют филологического образования, чтобы дать качественный перевод. Подождите, кто-нибудь обязательно переведёт.

[tourist]

Лиля I can translate it, sure, but it is the same as with CartN.
Of course it can be understood but it can be seen fun for native speakers, though for non-English speaker it may be OK. At least I can make my variant and after you have a better one you can use this better. But of course I can translate this wordly and not as native speaker.
Do you want real translation or just so-so?

[флоMaster]

tourist, ну за что же вы по-англицки человеку ответили-то?
Лиля, tourist хочет сказать, что он без проблем переведет эту страничку. Но он не иностранец и, поэтому, не может гарантировать качественного, на его взгляд, перевода. Но то, что перевод будет понятен и адекватен, tourist уверен.
Я присоединяюсь к tourist!

[tourist]

I spent some time working out this problem. It was really hard. I didn't know names of diseases and I couldn't have the words just from the Dictionary as they could have different meaning in different contexts. I had to do research on this topic to find out similar cases and to study the vocabulary from them. I did a quarter of the text. But I am afraid of showing it here as it could be laughed at. It is not ready yet a for-showing-to-people text. It demands to be discussed over. If anybody can support the discussion I can put here my start point.  And I am sorry but if I didn't show it to you today, next my forum-session could be in several days, even in 5 or so. I ask your advice. Will you discuss it and improve it or give your own example?

[furzifurzi]

i'm ready to do any tiresome and boring search of medical notions.
sorry cant offer more cuz my grammar is far from ideal
if i can be useful, mail me

[tourist]

Thank you furzifurzi Of course the grammar is important, but while translating I felt that not less important is the style and emotions of the writing here. I am afraid that I can't keep these points of my writing. I see there are many problems and not only grammar and terms, but at least style and emotions and not to add some phraseological units and metonymy etc. It is really challenge to me and I am not able to do it at once but you can help me to improve my draft and maybe together we will reach something well-done.

[tourist]

Лиля какое Ваше мнение по данной дискуссии насчет нашего перевода? Вы уже разочаровались в нас? Нашли другой способ? Или уже просто поздно? Я перевел три четверти текста со страницы, но его нужно еще проверить на грамматику и, я думаю, нужно попытаться с кем-то знающим обсудить медицинские термины и стилистику, а также экспрессивную сторону текста. Я могу показать здесь что я сделал, но оно очень сырое и требует значительной доработки. С точки зрения понимания - для не англоязычных читателей - возможно он и подойдет, а вот насчет литературности - я сильно сомневаюсь. Что Вы скажете?

[tourist]

Лиля   я уже не успеваю даже перевести до конца, и Вы не говорите об необходимости делать данный перевод. Я помещу созданный мною текст здесь и попросим ребят, чтобы они поработали с ним. Может кто-нибудь его завершит и исправит. Я в свою очередь, пересмотрю его и может все же почитаю статьи на эту тему, если смогу и через 5 дней я покажу, что я смог сделать. А сейчас - можно временно пользоваться и тем, что есть

Прошу:

“Help Save My Daughter…”
“Help Save My Daughter…”  - that was the beginning of the letter, which we received at our Fund.
Natasha is a young woman of 26, she has 4-years-old lovely boy. She is this boy’s mother …, mother who has bad disease … it is really bad disease. This disease is late discovered heart valvular disease. Natasha was pregnant at that time. Birth of her son made the disease worse; as a result, she developed one more terrible disease…
At the beginning of the year Natasha got worse. On 10th of April the young woman got to a hospital directly from a cardiologic ward, where she had had her heart examined. They delivered her to the Institute named after N.Sclifosovsky to have urgent surgical operation by reason of her heart disease. However, as the surgeons of the institute had no specialized surgical equipment and because of complications of the disease, they refused to start the surgical operation and made her undergo an additional examination at the Institute named after A.Bakulev, where, as they thought, they would have her heart operated. The specialists of that Institute came to the conclusion that they could not do a surgical operation because of sclerotic hypertension which they observed while examining Natasha.
Natasha has acquired secondary pulmonary hypertension and high pressure in pulmonary artery makes heart work harder.  As the examination brought to light she has the secondary  ventricular septal defect, the secondary atrial septal defect, circulation insufficiency of the second circulatory system.
While giving expert’s opinion, Moscow Chief Pulmonologists said to Natasha’s mama, that they should not give in and look for the possibility to have transplantation of the complex “heart-lungs” done.
Natasha’s family is under trying conditions. Natasha has no father; therefore her mom alone grows up her and her 14-years-old brother. Natasha’s husband who was not able neither to be a good husband nor a good father to her son and now he is “vanish into thin air” and Natasha doesn’t expect any assistance from his side. At present Natasha is under matrimonial cause. In the end of May Natasha formalized disability group II. She is now striving to make some money on different works. She works at a shop, however, even if she can have work and they don’t give her heavy tasks at the work, she returns home half dead. Natasha’s mother does everything to save her daughter.
Abstract from Natasha’s mother’s letter:
…I am not able to solve the financial problem with payment for Natasha’s treatment. I am lonely mother and am growing up my 14-years-old son, and moreover, I am temporary unemployed (I am registered at unemployment exchange). I had to resign because of my health condition, that was because in February I was at City Clinic 12 …

…I am all alone, I am running through all the authority offices, striving to save my daughter, additionally, I need to find work to support my family. Now Natasha has breathing problem, she is panting even when she doesn’t move. She hardly can climb the 5th floor that what she has to do as we live on the 5th floor in the house without a lift. She has to stop on each floor to calm down her breathing.

On 26 May Natasha took all the papers and went to formalize her disability. She has the II group of disability now, and the 2 subgroup that enable her to work part-time. She returned in bad mood, depressed as she used to earn her keep by herself.

The situation we got in seems hopeless.
I ask you to help us very much, there is a chance to save her and I am full of hope!
 
At that moment I was plunged in thinking over the pain which must have covered the children who lost their dearest - their moms. Almost a year passed as we struggled to save a young woman Helen Selezneva, Valera’s 28-years-old mother. But everything what we did was too late. Helen had pulmonary hypertension grown into terminal stage. For first time I saw Helen in a hospital several days before she passed away. I could see the dreadful disease … she couldn’t breathe, her almost unconsciousness because of lack of oxygen in her blood, and her pleading look from under half-open eyes as to open them she was too weak… additionally she was unable to move, or do anything by herself…and dragging-on days that are lack of air. Can you only imagine every minute, every second you have no air to breathe with?  … and her weak    whisper: “I am strong … I can do this ….” It was the last stage when there is nothing to do for help…
Valera has been left alone and without his mom, however, he has not got to children's home and he has a good family, he has very caring grandma. Nevertheless, when I come to them I feel pain within heart of the boy. This is a pain of losing his mother and boy has no father as well…
Now we in charge for Natasha Pylkova, a young 26-years-old woman, and her son, little Egorka, who have no idea about the terrible disease, which is going to take her mom away from him. Natasha has
congenital heart disease and recently revealed secondary pulmonary hypertension. Natasha is beginning panting. However Natasha are not in critical stage of her pulmonary hypertension and she has a chance of  being saved. First of all she has to undergo  an examination at a specialized clinic in which they can determine the priority of Natasha’s bunch of diseases. Was congenital heart disease earlier or pulmonary hypertension caused it? Moscow experts’ epicrisis raised questions in German specialists. Unfortunately, Russian doctors just at the beginning of battle with this disease.
A thorough examination is required. There is a chance that Natasha will be doing well if the problem is in her congenital heart disease and German specialists can heal her by operating her and to prescribe her adequate care for her pulmonary hypertension and, while it is not late,  she could do without transplantation of complex “heart-lungs”, which cost is overwhelming.
We want not to lose time very much, not to let disease grow into the terminal stage, we want to save mama for Egorka very much. Help us, please, in our attempts” (Lilya)

[Lastochka]

Лиля, здравствуйте, готова помочь с переводами (по крайней мере попробовать). Опыт подобный есть - несколько раз помогала в переводе историй болезни для благотворительной организации, которая занималась отправкой детей на лечение за границу. Насколько я знаю, проблем никаких тогда не возникло. Хотя, конечно, если есть возможность найти медика, хорошо знающего английский - было бы надежнее.

[tourist]

Я вижу что Лиля   поняла, что мы здесь не годимся для решения ее задачи и, как все нормальные люди, решила обратиться к профессионалу.
Но если Вы все же надеетесь на любителей - то дайте этот текст на проверку, ну хотя бы Вашему австралийскому партнеру - пусть стилистику посмотрит, а к тому же, если я правильно понял, ей известны названия заболеваний, раз она справку переводила.

А пока, пока - то что оставалось закончить:

Perfidious and unpredictable behavior of pulmonary hypertension puts a human body in dangerous conditions. Natasha has a chance, and there is still time, though not much time, to use this chance, however time in such conditions is most  valuable thing. First of all she needs to have special physical examination at a specialized clinic done, as well as typing and then to look for a donor. In no time, various clinics of Germany and France, and probably, those in Israel and Italy, will receive Natasha’s medical report. On receiving experts’ conclusion it will become clear what kind of transplantation Natasha requires, will it be lungs or complex “heart-lungs”. The cost of the transplantation is   150 000 - 300 000 Euro depending on its kind.
First and foremost the girl need the money for her examination.

Additional data of 17 June 2008: On having reviewed Natasha’s medical report, experts of a Berlin clinic have decided to provide thorough clinical examination for the girl.
The invoice for such examination is 15 600 Euro. We have received the invoice with the bank data of the clinic. Please, help Natasha, this examination is vital for her and the sooner it will be done the more chances will be to save her.

[tourist]

Я два дня назад перечитал мой перевод и исправил с полтора десятка ошибок. Тогда я думал, что для того, чтобы я увидел остальные ошибки мне понадобиться пару месяцев. Но сегодня я просмотрел перевод и сделал еще полтора десятка исправлений. Есть вероятность, что я вместо старых ошибок внес новые, но думаю 80% моих правок были результативными и перевод стал лучше. Но у меня осталось еще много разных сомнений. Может Вы сможете прочитать его и сказать можно ли его хоть понять, или он совсем плох и безнадежен?





“Help Save My Daughter…”
“Help To Save My Daughter…”  - this is the beginning of the letter, which our Fund received.
Natasha is a young woman of 26, she is a mother of 4-year-old lovely boy. The mother who is ill with a serious disease. This disease is late discovered heart valvular disease. It was revealed when Natasha was pregnant. The birth of her son caused the disease to get worse; as a result, she developed one more serious disease…
Since the beginning of the year Natasha has been having her health conditions got worse. On 10 April, the young woman got to hospital right from a cardiologic ward, where she had had her heart examined. On making a decision to urgently operate her because of her heart disease, they delivered her to the Institute named after N.Sclifosovsky. However, as the surgeons of the institute had no special surgical equipment and because of complications of the disease, they refused to operate her and sent her to have additional examination at the Institute named after A.Bakulev, where, as they thought, she would probably have her heart operated. The specialists of that Institute came to the conclusion that they could not do a surgical operation because of sclerotic hypertension, which had been revealed by the examination.
Natasha has acquired secondary pulmonary hypertension and now high pressure in pulmonary artery makes her heart work harder.  The examination brought to light her having secondary ventricular septal defect, secondary atrial septal defect, circulation insufficiency of the second circulatory system.

Moscow Chief Pulmonologists's advice to Natasha’s mama was not to give in and look for the chance of doing transplantation of the complex “heart-lungs” for Natasha.
Natasha’s family is under trying conditions. Natasha has no father; therefore her mom alone grows up her and her 14-year-old brother. Now Natasha’s husband, who established himself neither as a good husband nor as a good father to their son, is “vanished into thin air” and Natasha doesn’t expect any support from his side. At present Natasha is under matrimonial cause. In the end of May Natasha formalized group II disability. She is now striving to make some money by working for different firms. Now she is working at a shop, however, even if she can get a job and they don’t give her heavy tasks there, she returns home half dead. Natasha’s mother does everything, what is in her power, in order to save her daughter.

Abstract from Natasha’s mother’s letter:
…I am not able to solve the financial problems and to pay for Natasha’s treatment. I am single mother and growing up my 14-year-old son, and moreover, I am temporary unemployed (I am registered at unemployment exchange). In February I was under treatment at City Clinic 12 and then, because of my health condition, I had to resign …

…now I am applying to every authority office, striving to save my daughter, and, in addition, now I have to find a job in order to support my family. Now Natasha has breathing problems, she is panting even when she is staying still. She can hardly climb the 5th floor to get to her flat; we live on the 5th floor of the house without a lift. She has to stop on each floor to calm her breathing down.


On 26 May Natasha took all the required papers and went to formalize her disability. They fixed the II group of disability to her, and the 2 subgroup that enable her to work part-time. She returned home in a bad mood, depressed because before she used to earn her keep by herself.

The situation we got in seems hopeless.
Please, help us! There is a chance of saving my daughter and I hope for her salvation!
 
“4-year-old Egorka has seriously sick mama… We know how people’s hearts respond to children’s grief and pain, particularly the hearts of the women who are mothers themselves, and who have little children either. However, adults under our charge are equal to little children, and they also need support, because they are not in power to cope with their difficulties by themselves.
At that moment I was plunged deep in thought about the pain which must have covered the children, who lost their dearest - their moms. Almost a year of our struggle for saving life of a young woman Helen Selezneva, Valera’s 28-year-old mother, has already passed. But everything we did was done too late. Helen had pulmonary hypertension grown into the terminal stage. For first time I saw Helen in the hospital before several days of her passing away. I could see the dreadful disease … she couldn’t breathe, I could see her almost unconsciousness because of lack of oxygen in her blood, and her pleading look from under half-open eyes as she was too weak to open them… additionally she was unable to move, or do anything else by herself…and she was panting, almost suffocating with lack of air. Can you only imagine every minute, every second when you have no air to breathe with?  … and her weak    whisper: “I am strong … I can do this ….” It was the last stage when there was no chance of saving her…
Valera has been left on his own and without his mom, however, he has not got to children's home and he has a good family, he has very caring grandma. Nevertheless, when I come to them I feel pain within heart of the boy. This is a pain of the loss of his mother and the boy has no father as well…
Now we are in charge of Natasha Pylkova, a young 26-year-old woman, and her son, little Egorka, who have no idea about the terrible disease, which can take her mom away from him. Natasha has congenital heart disease and the secondary pulmonary hypertension has been revealed recently. Natasha begins panting. However Natasha is not in critical stage of her pulmonary hypertension and she has a chance of being saved. First of all she has to undergo an examination at a specialized clinic in which they can determine the priority in Natasha’s bunch of diseases. Was congenital heart disease earlier or pulmonary hypertension caused it? Moscow experts’ epicrisis raised questions in German specialists. Unfortunately, Russian doctors just at the beginning of the battle with this disease.
Natasha requires a thorough examination. There is a possibility of Natasha’s being cured if the problem is in her congenital heart disease and German specialists can heal her by operating her and prescribing her adequate care for her pulmonary hypertension and, while it is not late,  she could do without transplantation of complex “heart-lungs”, which cost is overwhelming.
We want very much not to lose time, not to let disease grow into the terminal stage, we want to save mama for Egorka very much. Help us, please, in our attempts” (Lilya)

Perfidious and unpredictable behavior of pulmonary hypertension puts a human body in dangerous conditions. Natasha has a chance, and there is still time, though not much time, to use this chance, however, time in such conditions is most valuable thing. First of all she needs special physical examination at a specialized clinic, as well as to have to type disease and then we have to find a donor. In no time, various clinics of Germany and France, and probably, those in Israel and Italy, will receive Natasha’s medical report. On receiving experts’ conclusion, it will become clear what kind of transplantation Natasha requires, will it be lungs or complex “heart-lungs” transplantation. The cost of the transplantation is   150 000 - 300 000 Euro depending on its kind.
First and foremost the girl needs the money for her examination.

Additional data of 17 June 2008: On having reviewed Natasha’s medical report, experts of a Berlin clinic have decided to take the girl for a thorough clinical examination.
The invoice for this examination is 15 600 Euro. We have received the clinic invoice with the bank data on it. Please, help Natasha, this examination is vital for her and the sooner it will be done the more chances of saving her we will have.

[Wild Wind]

Я два дня назад перечитал мой перевод и исправил с полтора десятка ошибок. Тогда я думал, что для того, чтобы я увидел остальные ошибки мне понадобиться пару месяцев. Но сегодня я просмотрел перевод и сделал еще полтора десятка исправлений. Есть вероятность, что я вместо старых ошибок внес новые, но думаю 80% моих правок были результативными и перевод стал лучше. Но у меня осталось еще много разных сомнений. Может Вы сможете прочитать его и сказать можно ли его хоть понять, или он совсем плох и безнадежен?





“Help Save My Daughter…”
“Help To Save My Daughter…”  - this is the beginning of the letter, which our Fund received.
Natasha is a young woman of 26, she is a mother of 4-year-old lovely boy. The mother who is ill with a serious disease. This disease is late discovered heart valvular disease. It was revealed when Natasha was pregnant. The birth of her son caused the disease to get worse; as a result, she developed one more serious disease…
Since the beginning of the year Natasha has been having her health conditions got worse. On 10 April, the young woman got to hospital right from a cardiologic ward, where she had had her heart examined. On making a decision to urgently operate her because of her heart disease, they delivered her to the Institute named after N.Sclifosovsky. However, as the surgeons of the institute had no special surgical equipment and because of complications of the disease, they refused to operate her and sent her to have additional examination at the Institute named after A.Bakulev, where, as they thought, she would probably have her heart operated. The specialists of that Institute came to the conclusion that they could not do a surgical operation because of sclerotic hypertension, which had been revealed by the examination.
Natasha has acquired secondary pulmonary hypertension and now high pressure in pulmonary artery makes her heart work harder.  The examination brought to light her having secondary ventricular septal defect, secondary atrial septal defect, circulation insufficiency of the second circulatory system.

Moscow Chief Pulmonologists's advice to Natasha’s mama was not to give in and look for the chance of doing transplantation of the complex “heart-lungs” for Natasha.
Natasha’s family is under trying conditions. Natasha has no father; therefore her mom alone grows up her and her 14-year-old brother. Now Natasha’s husband, who established himself neither as a good husband nor as a good father to their son, is “vanished into thin air” and Natasha doesn’t expect any support from his side. At present Natasha is under matrimonial cause. In the end of May Natasha formalized group II disability. She is now striving to make some money by working for different firms. Now she is working at a shop, however, even if she can get a job and they don’t give her heavy tasks there, she returns home half dead. Natasha’s mother does everything, what is in her power, in order to save her daughter.

Abstract from Natasha’s mother’s letter:
…I am not able to solve the financial problems and to pay for Natasha’s treatment. I am single mother and growing up my 14-year-old son, and moreover, I am temporary unemployed (I am registered at unemployment exchange). In February I was under treatment at City Clinic 12 and then, because of my health condition, I had to resign …

…now I am applying to every authority office, striving to save my daughter, and, in addition, now I have to find a job in order to support my family. Now Natasha has breathing problems, she is panting even when she is staying still. She can hardly climb the 5th floor to get to her flat; we live on the 5th floor of the house without a lift. She has to stop on each floor to calm her breathing down.


On 26 May Natasha took all the required papers and went to formalize her disability. They fixed the II group of disability to her, and the 2 subgroup that enable her to work part-time. She returned home in a bad mood, depressed because before she used to earn her keep by herself.

The situation we got in seems hopeless.
Please, help us! There is a chance of saving my daughter and I hope for her salvation!
 
“4-year-old Egorka has seriously sick mama… We know how people’s hearts respond to children’s grief and pain, particularly the hearts of the women who are mothers themselves, and who have little children either. However, adults under our charge are equal to little children, and they also need support, because they are not in power to cope with their difficulties by themselves.
At that moment I was plunged deep in thought about the pain which must have covered the children, who lost their dearest - their moms. Almost a year of our struggle for saving life of a young woman Helen Selezneva, Valera’s 28-year-old mother, has already passed. But everything we did was done too late. Helen had pulmonary hypertension grown into the terminal stage. For first time I saw Helen in the hospital before several days of her passing away. I could see the dreadful disease … she couldn’t breathe, I could see her almost unconsciousness because of lack of oxygen in her blood, and her pleading look from under half-open eyes as she was too weak to open them… additionally she was unable to move, or do anything else by herself…and she was panting, almost suffocating with lack of air. Can you only imagine every minute, every second when you have no air to breathe with?  … and her weak    whisper: “I am strong … I can do this ….” It was the last stage when there was no chance of saving her…
Valera has been left on his own and without his mom, however, he has not got to children's home and he has a good family, he has very caring grandma. Nevertheless, when I come to them I feel pain within heart of the boy. This is a pain of the loss of his mother and the boy has no father as well…
Now we are in charge of Natasha Pylkova, a young 26-year-old woman, and her son, little Egorka, who have no idea about the terrible disease, which can take her mom away from him. Natasha has congenital heart disease and the secondary pulmonary hypertension has been revealed recently. Natasha begins panting. However Natasha is not in critical stage of her pulmonary hypertension and she has a chance of being saved. First of all she has to undergo an examination at a specialized clinic in which they can determine the priority in Natasha’s bunch of diseases. Was congenital heart disease earlier or pulmonary hypertension caused it? Moscow experts’ epicrisis raised questions in German specialists. Unfortunately, Russian doctors just at the beginning of the battle with this disease.
Natasha requires a thorough examination. There is a possibility of Natasha’s being cured if the problem is in her congenital heart disease and German specialists can heal her by operating her and prescribing her adequate care for her pulmonary hypertension and, while it is not late,  she could do without transplantation of complex “heart-lungs”, which cost is overwhelming.
We want very much not to lose time, not to let disease grow into the terminal stage, we want to save mama for Egorka very much. Help us, please, in our attempts” (Lilya)

Perfidious and unpredictable behavior of pulmonary hypertension puts a human body in dangerous conditions. Natasha has a chance, and there is still time, though not much time, to use this chance, however, time in such conditions is most valuable thing. First of all she needs special physical examination at a specialized clinic, as well as to have to type disease and then we have to find a donor. In no time, various clinics of Germany and France, and probably, those in Israel and Italy, will receive Natasha’s medical report. On receiving experts’ conclusion, it will become clear what kind of transplantation Natasha requires, will it be lungs or complex “heart-lungs” transplantation. The cost of the transplantation is   150 000 - 300 000 Euro depending on its kind.
First and foremost the girl needs the money for her examination.

Additional data of 17 June 2008: On having reviewed Natasha’s medical report, experts of a Berlin clinic have decided to take the girl for a thorough clinical examination.
The invoice for this examination is 15 600 Euro. We have received the clinic invoice with the bank data on it. Please, help Natasha, this examination is vital for her and the sooner it will be done the more chances of saving her we will have.

Мне кажется, что твой перевод отличен!

[Wild Wind]

Now we are in charge of Natasha Pylkova, a young 26-year-old woman, and her son, little Egorka, who has !!! no idea about the terrible disease, which can take her mom away from him. Natasha has congenital heart disease and the secondary pulmonary hypertension has been revealed recently.

[tourist]

Wild Wind I see, thank you very much.
I am afraid that more mistakes are left than I have improved. I think that in some time I will find some of them but not every of them, that is for sure 

[Wild Wind]

Wild Wind I see, thank you very much.

You are welcome. I think

Wild WindI am afraid that more mistakes are left than I have improved. I think that in some time I will find some of them but not every of them, that is for sure 

Never mind. We aren't native speakers to translate these sentences in a perfect way. The main thing is to build the text according to the current grammatical english rules.
Also it's important to show the emotions relatively to this situation, what we think, what we want and what we need.

[tourist]

Wild Wind I know that I did a lot of grammar mistakes, but in addition to them I am not sure how well some words match to each other in texts, whether they can be used in couples, and to tell about emotive side of a text. When we translate into English we have to lower emotive side. English texts shouldn't be so expressive as Russian ones. And it is a problem in making translations. One thing more. I could mix different styles in the translation. For example, I could mix colloquial words with scientific one and to add some words from high style and it could be not so good as it could be seen to us. We have to be careful, that is why the text of my translation needs assessment from native speaker or highly-qualified philologist or translator.

[Wild Wind]

Wild Wind I know that I did a lot of grammar mistakes, but in addition to them I am not sure how well some words match to each other in texts, whether they can be used in couples, and to tell about emotive side of a text. When we translate into English we have to lower emotive side. English texts shouldn't be so expressive as Russian ones. And it is a problem in making translations. One thing more. I could mix different styles in the translation. For example, I could mix colloquial words with scientific one and to add some words from high style and it could be not so good as it could be seen to us. We have to be careful, that is why the text of my translation needs assessment from native speaker or highly-qualified philologist or translator.

Nevertheless you tried. 

[Лиля]

  Уважаемая Лиля! Не в том дело, что нужны бабки и прочее! Тут нужны профессионалы, а то я такого напереведу... 90% форумчан только учат языки и не все имеют филологического образования, чтобы дать качественный перевод. Подождите, кто-нибудь обязательно переведёт.

Вряд ли все на 100 % так,  как Вы думаете.Почему то уверена, что если бы предложила за перевод тысячи две, три, но желающих сразу нашлось много. Здесь ведь не только изучающие язык обитают

Подождала бы я конечно, только болезнь у Наташи не такая , чтобы ждать. А страничка на английском языке нужна , чтобы могли прочесть иностранцы, так как в России взрослым мало кто откликается помочь.