Topic: There Should Be No Compulsory Subjects., Прошу проверить)))

[Rumpelstilskin]

Students often complain about the number of compulsory school subjects. Most of them want to study optional subjects. They choose the area , where students will work in future. So, should be there compulsory subjects or not?
On the on hand, if students choose all the subjects the study, they don’t get proper education. Students are not enough developed in all areas, they had to.
Moreover, the can not change their life in future. For example, if a student chooses biology, and he isn’t interested in it, and wants to study maths, he can’t do this.
On the other hand, students will be motivated, school will be enjoyable for them. If the school is enjoyable for them, they do better progress in those areas, they had chosen.
In addition, optional subjects prepair student to pass special exams, such as our exam to Medicial Academy.
To sum up, choise is possible, when enough knowledge is acquired. And, of course, if you study optional subjects. You should study basic course too.


Что бы вы посоветовали мне добавить?А то нужен объем больше,а я не знаю что еще))))

[Sergmix]

Думаю, вам стоит указать объем. Не думаю, что здесь водятся телепаты.

[asil]

Students often complain about the number of compulsory school subjects. Most of them want to study optional subjects. They choose the area , where students will work in future. So, should be there compulsory subjects or not?
On the on hand, if students choose all the subjects the study, they don’t get proper education. Students are not enough developed in all areas, they had to.
Moreover, the can not change their life in future. For example, if a student chooses biology, and he isn’t interested in it, and wants to study maths, he can’t do this.
On the other hand, students will be motivated, school will be enjoyable for them. If the school is enjoyable for them, they do better progress in those areas, they had chosen.
In addition, optional subjects prepair student to pass special exams, such as our exam to Medicial Academy.
To sum up, choise is possible, when enough knowledge is acquired. And, of course, if you study optional subjects. You should study basic course too.


Что бы вы посоветовали мне добавить?А то нужен объем больше,а я не знаю что еще))))

Есть spelling mistakes. Проверьте.
Предметы по выбору - Electives или elective subjects (а не optional)
Экзамены для поступления в колледж или универистет - entrance exams

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