День добрый. Есть задание из книжки, написать резюме и сопроводительное письмо в олимпийский комитет, чтобы попасть в качестве персонала на олимпийские игры. Я писал по своей профессии, потому что про специфику работы врача или водопроводчика, например, знаю гораздо меньше, в том числе и по-английски ). Пожалуйста помогите найти ошибки в сочинении. Заранее спасибо.
CV
Ivan Petrov
Personal information
Address Russian Federation, Tambov, Lenina street, 2a-14
Telephone home: +7 4752 50-51-16
mobile: +7 909 123 12 13
Nationality Russian
Marital status Single
Date of birth 1st April 1988
Email
Ivan_Petrov@pochta.ruCareer history
2006 - Main network engineer at CJSC "NetSuperPlus".
As network engineer I've successfully worked at several big projects for such companies like Beeline, Sberbank, Lukoil ,etc. I participate in designing and planning our decisions, I also control the work of the engineer-installers and troubleshoot when something is wrong. Now I'm working for designing of a multiservice wireless network in main office of large internet-provider.
(Тут я хотел сказать следующее: В качестве сетевого инженера я успешно работал над несколькими большими проектами для таких компании как, билайн .... Я принимаю участие в проектировании и планировании наших решений, так же я руковожу работой инженеров-инсталkяторов (монтажников) и занимаюсь поиском неисправновтей, когда что-то не работает (работает не так.)
Education
2001-2005 - I graduated from State University of Tambov (with distinction). I studied on department of Electronic Engineering. (факультет электронной техники)
2006-2007. I had a training courses of some vendors for configuration and troubleshooting network equipment (Cisco, Avaya, Juniper).
Languages
My level of English is upper-intermediate (CEFR level B2). I have a good written and spoken skills. I have been studying English at language school for three years.
Russian (fluent).
Computers skills
OS Linux, FreeBSD - confident user. Windows XP, 7 - administrator.
Addition information
Driving licence - B level.
Member of the university swimming team.
Covering letter
Ivan Petrov
Tambov,
Russia
15th February, 2013
Olympic Committee
PO Box 1234
Dear Sir / Madam
I'm writing to apply for a job in Data Centre in the forthcoming Olympic Games.
I'm a qualified engineer and I have a big experience for maintenance and management large campus networks. I have a good level of English. I also have qualities like stress tolerance, hardworking and goodwill. I'm sure I'll good employe for Olympic Data Centre.
I'm sending you my CV as attached file.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Ivan Petrov.